OUTLINE
CONCEPT AND PREMISE 
NARRATIVE QUESTION
THEME


STORY/PLOT/STRUCTURE
WEAK BEGINNINGS  
SAGGY MIDDLES
UNSATIFYING ENDINGS

NARRATIVE ARC
CONFLICT AND TENSION
PACE
VOICE


CHARACTER ARCS
PROTAGONIST
ANTAGONIST
SECONDARY


SCENES
TIMING
DIALOGUE
WORLD BUILDING

POINT OF VIEW
CHOICES AND CONSISTENCY

My rates align with industry standards which you can view here
though every manuscript is unique.
Your manuscript will be first evaluated  by beta read to determine the scope required for an accurate quote.



 

Robert

Hayley provided excellent input for improving my story, and quickly, with positive, encouraging feedback. Her suggestions were especially useful for including helpful examples. I highly recommend her work. Thank you, Hayley.

Thank you Hayley for the great work! Your suggestions were extremely helpful and you were quick to get back to me. I appreciate it all. I hope to work with you in the future :)

Sarah

Kate

Hayley is great! She was quick and incredibly insightful. She took my background in screenwriting into account and tailored her comments for it. She was easy to talk to and responsive. I hope that she will take a look at my work again when I've made some changes!

Peter

I really appreciated your feedback and insights Hayley. It was much appreciated. The specific and general feedback really points me in the right direction. Thanks for the encouragement as well.